commentary no. 3

     I also like this poem because of how it relates to me. It not only makes you view the World differently, it also has a deep impact on the reader. The poem switched the way people should think about changing someone else or something. The moral of the poem is not to change the World but improve yourself, it is more about self elevation.
     The authors speaks in second person as if they were giving the reader instructions. It also gives the reader a sense that the author is speaking directly to them. They also use the repetition of you, this grabs the reader attention and make them feel of relevance. I think it was in the authors best intentions to make sure that reader actual put their words into real life perspective and to change the readers thought. That is the true power of poetry.