Tuesday, February 25, 2014

commentary no. 2

This is a great poem in which it actually relates to my current thoughts. I honestly believe everything happens for a reason and everyone has a purpose. In this poem the author is speaking about the deep inner self that no one really knows, this also goes back to the title. We are all searching for the true meaning of oneself and may hold in your true feeling an thoughts that we only adhere to. In time you will find the true aspect of your thoughts and forever holding back is not the way to go. Most people in life go through a struggle and if you hold back, all the pressure you have will boil over. In the author's case you should let it go and the memories will fade and you will find true meaning and fulfillment in oneself.
The author uses a good rhyme scheme that slows the reading of the reader. It also serves the purpose of creating periodic pauses in the reading. The author uses words like we and our as if they were talking about everyone as one being, but if you read the poem it is talking about the individual aspect of a persons mind and thoughts.

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